writing

Writing​

In Term 1 and Term 2

Start: We have writing groups. I was in Mrs.S class for writing and its good having help from all your Friends. At first we had to sit and and Mrs.S and she showed us a plan and everything like that.

Andy Story: Somewhere in the year we had to make a story about a adventure we could have at home. My story was about me getting attacked by attacked by a Snake.

Editing After we finished the story we had to edit it. I edited a lot of mine and It sounds good now. I think its much better. We have little edit cards to use to help us.

Holiday Story: The Holiday story we did at the start of the Year. We had to write the most interesting part of it. My story was about me going to Galactic Circus in Melbourne it's a big Arcade. But we had to have something bad happen in it and I fell of a Bridge and Nearly got hit by a Train.

Portal Story: This story is about me and some friends getting Teleported into a game we play. The game was called TOP 2 (Tales Of Pirates 2). We became a high Level and try and beat the strongest person in the game.

Soldier Letter. Soldier letter is when we had to make a plan about us being in war. We had t write what happend to us in war.

Formal Letter.

Informal Letter.

Adventure Story: our adventure story is about having an Extreme Adventure. Mine was us about going on a crazy roller Coaster. Intro: Characters,Scene and what you have done that day.

Middle: A problem builds up. Its big now and they notice it and what it fells like. Trying to fix the problem.

Conclusion: They fix it or suddenly stops.